Always Room For Improvement

   I really didn’t realize my research paper was completely off register, until I was done with it. I do realize now that being a research paper and not an op-ed article, o some other informal paper, my register should have been much more formal, and that I should have avoided all kinds of words that made it into a familiar register. I would agree that this is my main problem, right along with the apostrophe’s and some grammar issues. I will try my best to improve on these. Lastly, for the part of the references and the APA formatting, I did have a kind of hard time formatting those and will work on that as well with all the notes we have taken. Thank you for your feedback. J